This language is rough for a wedding invitation?
Jane & John Doe Boe invite you to join us for the private celebration of our marriage, Saturday, the third of August two thousand and eight at half after three in the afternoon at the Great Golf Resort Somwhere, Illinois Admission by invitation Reception only be before the wedding ceremony private *** If the word is replaced by the word "intimate" is a very small wedding so I would like keep it that way. What are your thoughts?
Oh Wow! I found you again and your questions are private ... strange ... anyway. You have great answers here ... no offense on taking anyones idea of your answers ... I recognize the great responses from some. I agree with most here ..... intimate private substitute. Agreeing with Ashley! Private has a negative connotation for most of the time. As for his line of "Admission "invitation only I would like to eliminate this problem. I agree it's a little snobbish. Surely they are trying to keep uninvited guests, but as two different persons mentioned above 1. It seems as if it were a celebrity wedding 2. Just be sure to be specific to address envelopes and RSVP or Reply Cards: TeresatheGreat made a great point here: In the response card or RSVP card to put an option to "assist" or "not coming" with the host name preceding it. "There is not space to write the names of anyone," as suggested teresathegreat in the line that says: Reception be before the wedding ceremony ... I think you mean procedure, which, in the following ways, in which case it would restate as callingmrsjones suggested, "immediately After the reception ceremony "callingmrsjones Also according to the average ... after three ... I also think you should change it to "half past three p.m." and as alroger3 mentioned, and I quote: "If you are clear to address your invitations and get answers more than invite, Just call and explain that you are having a small wedding and can only invite a limited number "I feel this soo long, I thought you would A summary of what, in my opinion is the best answer and put it in one! Brilliant eh? Good luck!
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